Sarah's songs/poems

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I love it Sarah! it's really good!

i really like this line, "loving you is such a softer, softer sin"

Haha, thank you =]

I just changed the title to 'Gerard'. I think that describes it pretty well. lol.

yea, there more people like gerard? x )
I LOVE IT. Is that the song you said you're proud of?

Thank you, Ghada =]

Yeah. I actually took a long time to think about it. The first couple lines popped in my head and I just started writing it. When I realized I was writing about Gee, I was like "I am so weird".

LOLOLOL you ARE weird! But weird is better and awesomer! lol

LOL, yay!

It's Love! xD =]

lolol, yeah. its not weirdness, its just love.

Yea. =]

I haven't written anything in a long time, so this might not be all that great.

Growing Wings

watch your eyes flicker
and then light at the suggestion
then the alarm goes off
and destroys my concentration

i guess i deserve it
for living inside my head too much

take my hand and run with me.
we'll go somewhere better.
steal my time and let it be
we'll stay lost forever
open your eyes; look and see
their thoughts; they don't matter
growing wings; we'll feel so free
and our lives belong together.

watch my eyes widen
and then sadden at my imagination
i don't want to think about you anymore
because all you give me is frusteration

i guess it's what i deserve
but this is just too much hurt

take my hand and run with me.
we'll go somewhere better.
steal my time and let it be
we'll stay lost forever
open your eyes; look and see
their thoughts; they don't matter
growing wings; we'll feel so free
and our lives belong together

cloudless
and there is no space inside
dreamless
and i cannot hide
i have no backbone
i have nothing to fall back on
this is all i have

i guess i deserve it
for living inside my head too much
i guess it's what i deserve
but this is just too much hurt

take my hand and run with me.
we'll go somewhere better.
steal my time and let it be
we'll stay lost forever
open your eyes; look and see
their thoughts; they don't matter
growing wings; we'll feel so free
and our lives belong together.

HOLY CUPCAKEYS!!! THAT WAS AWESOME SARAH!!!!

I DECLARE THIS MY NEW FAVE!!!

WOOT!


lol

LOLOL
Thank you!

welcome!!

Now pretty please get on yahoo messenger!!

I miss you again LOL

yup i love it! =]

Thanks, Ghada =]

Fine, Chelsea, I will get on Yahoo.
=]

LOL

You're Welcome. =]

I sent this poem in for INO's poem challenge. I had to base the poem on this photo.

A Child's Birthday Party

A blond in pink
A symbol of pure innocence
Food and deliciousness surrounding her
On the day she turns a year older

A brunette in purple
Looking confused and worried
Wonders of taste all around her
But her mind is somewhere else

Children gathered for a celebration
Brought together by an invitation

Their young lives are filled with happiness
They know of nothing else

And I can't help but freight
For their young lives and the horror they may have met

As for now, they are just children having fun
There is no mischief their innocence could of done.

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i love it sarah! i hope you win!

thanks! =]

I'm not sure about this one.

Mainstream

so many sad and somber songs
sang by singers that didn't write the words
voice overs and lip syncers
the light of reality and perfection is growing dim.

so many slip ups and over dramatics
done by the messy or the drama queens
institutions and medications
are what all these celebrities are talking about.

television isn't worth my time anymore
and the mainstream music is such a bore
ignorance and chat speak are defined as 'cool'
and so is acting like a dick in school
i'm going to loose my mind and nerve
if these lime light obsessers don't get what they deserve.

so many prescribed pills that the stoners chew
along with all of the other shit that they do
sky highers and pothead liars
is what all the 'bad' teenagers are dreaming about

so many kids that get whatever they ask for
and no matter what they get, they still want more
just bitches and it itches
itches me to know that they will always be spoiled rotten

television isn't worth my time anymore
and the mainstream music is such a bore
ignorance and chat speak are defined as 'cool'
and so is getting poor grades and acting like a dick in school
i'm going to loose my mind and nerve
if these lime light obsessers don't get what they deserve.

voice overs and lip syncers
institutions and medications
sky highers and pothead liars
just bitches and it itches
itches me to know that I can't remedy their ways.

so much ignorance and stupidity
but the beautiful people overpower the liabilities
and i know there are a handful of heroes out there
and i pray that they will be recognized.

television isn't worth my time anymore
and the mainstream music is such a bore
ignorance and chat speak are defined as 'cool'
and so is acting like a dick in school
i'm going to loose my mind and nerve
if these lime light obsessers don't get what they deserve.

WOOOOOOT!!!!


I honestly really love it Sarah! It's great!

Now one of my favorites!!! YAY!

lol

LOL, thanks!

welcome!

You can vote for "A Child's Birthday Party" at INO now.

Go to www.imnotokay.net/board
Go into the Poetry board
Go to POETRY CHALLENGE ENTRIES
My poem is the second one.
PM left hand luke. You can make the topic of the message something like, "poem vote" or something. Just type the number 2.

There are only 4 poems to vote for. I like the other ones written, too.
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