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Moonlight Drive

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PostSubject: Faye's Poems   Faye's Poems Icon_minitime1/3/2008, 1:54 am

I only have one. It was an English assignment. We have to read a book, then write down interesting words we found. We then had to make a poem out of the words I found. The book I read was Splintering by Eireann Corrigan. Amazing book by the way.

It's a little depressing, and I'm not really sure what it's about, but here it is anyway.

My little sister imagines nightmares.
Her helpless pride is s h a t t e r e d and her hope is flattened.
Worry, panic, fear – her courage and defenses nearly died.
Cautious gasps and weary secrets forgotten.

Brother – Shadows, darkness, blank…adrenaline pumping for payback!
Crying INSANITY!!
Small miracles needed, but dead.
Damaged, terrible, smoldering emotions, but is he tough enough?

Her simmering rage cries in the dark.
I s o l a t e d from family.
Essential protection lies with Evan.
Wishing to rebuild the aftermath of scars.

His hoarse voice SCREAMING!!
Lacking passion…
Together and coping.
Withstanding the barreling ATTACK!
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PostSubject: Re: Faye's Poems   Faye's Poems Icon_minitime1/3/2008, 4:53 am

That's really good; really beautiful.
I like it a lot Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Faye's Poems   Faye's Poems Icon_minitime1/3/2008, 5:08 am

Shocked wow! I love it Faye! It's very different and unique. I've never heard a poem like it before!

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Her simmering rage cries in the dark.
I s o l a t e d from family.

This is my favorite part. I can kind of relate to it too cause I sometimes feel isolated from family.

Good job Faye! Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Faye's Poems   Faye's Poems Icon_minitime1/13/2008, 2:44 am

Thanks guys! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Faye's Poems   Faye's Poems Icon_minitime1/13/2008, 3:48 am

Welcomes!

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