Yes, do it the Gerard Way!

I think you should still post them. We can give you critique and advice if we see what you write =]

Okay, I'll try.

OKay =]

And its not long like when you write the same part again ... you know?!

You mean repeating a chorus?
I'll make a lyric writing tips thread =]

yup thats what i mean!
and thanks for helping. =]

Lies & Rum

The haze stretches as far as I can see
My daze overwhelms my senses and blackens out everything I try to be.

Is it wrong to change for the better?
Is it wrong that I had told you forever?
Can promises be broken and taken back
After an oath has been swore?

My days are stretching and bleeding
My ways are changing from being close to finished to being nowhere near completed.

Is it wrong to fight for a right?
Is it wrong to go to sleep before the night?
Can I sleep for the rest of my life
And never wake up again?

What we have become
Is drenched in lies and rum
Wrongs and rights
Have never been so mutilated.
When should I come
And change the years of my life?
Everyday is a new battle
That leave my eyes so dilated.

The haze stretches as far as I can see
My daze overwhelms my senses and blackens out everything I try to be.

Is it wrong to change for the better?
Is it wrong that I had told you forever?
Can I sleep for the rest of my life
And never wake up again?

What we have become
Is drenched in lies and rum
Wrongs and rights
Have never been so mutilated.

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Song 12

(Written about the MCR song, Disenchanted)

When no one else is around
And being social is 6 feet underground
The old radio is on
And out pours a sad song

The guitar strums and sings
Creating a voice of it's own
The drums come in
And the voice begins to sing

The words are whispered and carried on
Like angels chanting a chorus
The bass vibrates the core
And out comes relaxed words to pour

My breath is taken away
From the beauty of the tune
Beauty like a bed of roses
That were recently in bloom

The music dances and sways
Around my ears like a lullaby
Then lazily returns to the radio
As the track ends and dies

The mood is still in my head
The lyrics don't leave my ears
As the next song begins to play
Song 12 is the one that brought me tears.

wow!!! great as usual !!! .

Thanx! =]

you're welcome!

Perseverance

Spitting out reasons
Why I do the things I do
It's a stupid adolescent life
Showered in everything I fear
I have this plan of sorrow
Of not waking up tomorrow
But I don't really think it's what I want
But I've given up on everything I've been craving.

Love me
Love me not
I will never see
Everything that I've got
Hate me
Hate me not
I will never see
Everything that I've lost
I will never realize
All the good I've got

Coughing up excuses
To explain the way I feel
It's a pathetic preteen angst
Drenched with a dose of realness
I have a feeling in my gut
That makes all these cuts
And I can't keep running away
Because the past will never leave me alone.

Love me
Love me not
I will never see
Everything that I've got
Hate me
Hate me not
I will never see
Everything that I've lost
I will never realize
All the good I've got

You were the one..
But every things so tragic
I lost you in the haze
You were everything
But I can't remember
But the taste is on my tongue
The tip of my tongue

I have a feeling in my gut
That forms all these cuts
But now the scabs pick and fade
And disappear before my eyes
My razor blade romance is lost
And love is all I've got

Love me
Love me not
I will always be
Everything I've got
Hate me
Hate me not
I will never see
Everything that I've lost
I will always realize
I will always see
All the good I've got.

hey good one!

Thanx =]

A new song I finished writing for Mr. Gerard Way. He is so easy to write about =]

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Gerard

Why do you have to be so beautiful
So much so that you make my heart melt?
Why do you have to be so far away?
To the point where I can't hold you?
To the point where I can't thank you
For saving me.

Why can't there be more people on this Earth like you?
To make this world a better place.

Standing up for what you believe in
And not giving a fuck about what people say
Loving you is such a softer, softer sin
And I enjoy seeing your face every day.

Why are you so unbelievable?
And every word I use will never describe you.
Why do you have to be so fucking amazing
To the point where I can't breathe?
To the point where I can't stop
Can't stop smileing?
So I just stop trying.

Why can't there be more people on this Earth like you
To make this world a better place?

Standing up for what you believe in
And not giving a fuck about what people say
Loving you is such a softer, softer sin
And I enjoy seeing your face every day.

Why do you have to be so beautiful
To the point where I just can't stop smileing?
Why do your eyes have to be so intense
To the point where I can't stop stareing?

If we wanted this world to be a better place
Well, then we would just need more people like you
And why do I keep on writing these sappy songs
About my love for you?

Standing up for what you believe in
And not giving a fuck about what people say
Loving you is such a softer, softer sin
And I enjoy seeing your face every day.

And now I'm watching your face fade away
From the place where I saw you last
And as the minutes pass by through the day
I wish that every second I have with you
Would forever last.

Why can't there be more people on this Earth like you
To make this world a better place?