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Rara

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PostSubject: Fear   9/18/2008, 9:31 pm

This is my English assignment that was due today, we had to write this composition showing that this person was afraid of something but without using the words scared and fear etc..
hope you like it !

Her body stiffens at the shrilly sound of the scream, coming from nearby. She slowly turns around, and her eyes start to dart here and there, looking for the source, while listening intently for another scream. Concentrating on her sense of hearing, she prepares herself for another scream, but none comes. She waits and waits, but her patience is of no avail. Giving up, she continues walking down the shrubby gravelly path in front of her cautiously. Putting down each foot as softly and quickly as possible, she keeps on walking through the dark forest around her, with only the beam of light from her flashlight guiding her back to the campsite. Grave thoughts crawl into the edge of her agitating mind, tugging onto her stream of thoughts. Anxiety rises in her as she approaches the campsite, worrying about her friends. Another scream she hears, sounding closer than before. Finally arriving, her eyes sweep the moonlit campsite, but find it empty. The pounding of her heart against her ribs increase. She warily walks around the campsite, looking around for hints. Feeling a soft rustle come from behind, she freezes in her place, eyes shut. Slowly, she turns around, and opens a fraction of her eyes, peering into the empty space in front of her. She looks around, but there seems to be no one. She lets out a sigh, relieved. Suddenly, a person grabs her from the back and covers her eyes and gags her mouth. Everything turns pitch black. She struggles to break free, but the person holding her was too strong. She felt herself being dragged out of the cold campsite and into a warm place. She tries to rely on her senses, those that she could use. Scenting the air, she smells a strong metallic aroma, wafting strongly. She hears soft whimpering coming from behind. Her abductor stops, and throws her against a wall. He then removes the eye cover, but leaves the gag on. She glances around the room, and finds corpses thrown around. Looking closer, she seems to recognize them. Realization hit her in a flash. She had to get out. She saw the advancing shadow of the abductor, and knew it was too late.
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PostSubject: Re: Fear   9/19/2008, 5:02 am

oh wow rara! this was amazing! =D

great descriptive words! it felt like i was really there o__o lol

i love it a lot ^___^

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PostSubject: Re: Fear   9/19/2008, 5:03 am

I like it, Rara. You write really well. =)

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PostSubject: Re: Fear   9/20/2008, 12:30 am

Aww thanks guys !
It means alot ! =] =]
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