Good update!

I'd just give a little piece of contructive criticism. I saw you wrote 'ur' instead of 'your.' I don't know if you meant to or not, but it's better your fully write out your words in a story. It's easier to read and it looks more professional. :]

All in all, I think this is good! :]

Thanks XD

I feel very stupid now though

Seriously, that is the very first time I have ever used txt speak in a fic. I normally take very good care NOT to. Must have been tired that day.