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PostSubject: Re: Drowning Lessons   1/23/2008, 6:02 am

*Cries*
This is so sad.
I do love the lines;

" I want to see Lacey. I just…want to see her lying there on top of that table, to see her there sleeping forever. Maybe then I’ll come right back to reality and actually believe that she’s gone forever. And forever….well forever is a long time to wait. It seems as if it’s an endless period of time. You can sit in one place for hours and it seems as if that someone or something is never going to come back. And it kills me inside to know that Lacey is never ever coming back.

Sometimes it feels like I’m always repeating my own thoughts. My mind is like a broken record. All it knows how to do is think about the accident. I’ve noticed that one of the two words it likes to say is, “Lacey’s dead.”

‘Lacey’s dead. Lacey’s dead. Lacey’s dead.’

It never seems to end. "


That was written well, made me feel empathetic to Brianna, and made me extremely sad.
But it's good, I'm happy you FINALLY updated Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Drowning Lessons   1/23/2008, 8:30 am

lolololol THANKSSSSSS!!

And yeah! I havn't updated for about three months O__o lol

I'm happy that I updated it even though i don't think that chapter was as good as the rest of them lol

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PostSubject: Re: Drowning Lessons   1/23/2008, 9:57 am

LOL.
I thought it was good!
ALL THAT MATTERS IS WHAT I THINK.
Ha.
And you're welcome =]

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PostSubject: Re: Drowning Lessons   1/23/2008, 12:53 pm

LMAO

I guess you are right Sarah! haha

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PostSubject: Re: Drowning Lessons   1/28/2008, 2:12 am

Oh my gosh Chelsea. That was amazing. Really, you are an awesome writer.

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PostSubject: Re: Drowning Lessons   1/28/2008, 4:41 am

lol thankies Faye! Very Happy

I think you're an awesome writer tooo!

So is Sarah of course Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Drowning Lessons   1/28/2008, 5:01 am

Thanks. Very Happy

And, yes, Sarah is too.

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PostSubject: Re: Drowning Lessons   2/26/2008, 12:58 pm

LMAO I just noticed in the last chapter that i wrote....."We went to Audrey's viewing today...." Instead of saying Lacey hahahahhaa

I got mixed up in my stories and put in Audrey from Give Me Novacaine! I fixed it and put Lacey though but still! xD

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PostSubject: Re: Drowning Lessons   3/2/2008, 2:37 am

Speaking of "Give Me Novacaine," more of that coming up?

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PostSubject: Re: Drowning Lessons   3/5/2008, 8:44 am

hmmm........i think once i figure out some sort of general plot then i think so....i have a general plot but it's just translating that into my microsoft word program Smile yup. I need to get on Daddy Dearest too!! damn! -___- I feel so behind...lolol

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PostSubject: Re: Drowning Lessons   3/13/2008, 5:04 am

lol Don't worry, I'll always be behind. I know I'll eventually finish all my stories, but I need time to write.

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PostSubject: Re: Drowning Lessons   3/13/2008, 7:46 am

lol i'm gonna try to write more of my stories maybe hopefully during spring break which isn't that far away Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Drowning Lessons   3/30/2008, 6:35 am

Yeah, there should so be another Give Me Novacaine.
You both are great writers, and thaaaaaaaanks. =]

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